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   Finish this testimonial! !

The book   Wu Shuang Shuzi was written for about a year and seven months, with a total of 2.68 million words. The number of words is not particularly large, but it is not particularly small.

The results of this book are much better than the previous one. It’s not bad for a rookie author like me. Of course, because the mid-term plot is a little broken, and the latter has changed from three shifts to two shifts. What’s more, the post-subscription is not very good. This is all my personal reasons, and I don’t blame anyone. (The main reason for the collapse of the plot is because I killed Li Shen!)

Since May or June, I have felt that this book has reached the end, but because there is no outline, I can only deduce it, and I can’t figure out when it will be finished. , I want to understand that there are actually two nodes that can be completed.

   The first node is when Li Xin enters the capital. At that time, he can actually finish the book and leave an open ending, which will be much better than the current ending.

Because according to my original idea, it would be better for Li Xin’s son to change his surname to be the emperor, so that there will be a step down on both sides. Later, after showing signs of this, I received a lot of opinions from readers (mainly spraying me), I was shaken. After collecting the opinions of readers and editors in the group, I also felt that it was not appropriate to deal with it, and this is the end.

   Then let’s talk about the character of Li Xin.

   I actually mentioned at the end of the previous chapter that Li Xin is a microcosm of my own character (of course I’m rather cowardly and won’t fight people like him).

Well, when I write a book without an outline, I usually set a big main line, and then deduce it along the way. When I write a book, I will think about how I would say and do it if I were this character. Because the other characters are not modern people, their personalities are relatively independent, but when I write about the protagonist, I will think about what a modern person would do in such a situation.

I don’t know what most modern people think, so I can only enter it according to my own ideas. For example, if I am Li Xin, I have a good relationship with the emperor, and the royal family is not particularly bad, then I enter the capital. I must be too embarrassed to kill the whole family.

  If I were Li Xin and I went to fight the Xianbei people, even if I knew that they were sinful, but if I saw three, four, five or six year old children **** in front of me, I would definitely not be able to do it.

   But the Xianbei people had to die because of the plot arrangement, so I arranged for Mu Ying to kill, not the protagonist.

The reason why I raised a lot of questions about the character of the protagonist is because the character of the protagonist in this book has been criticized by many people, and the main points of criticism are that the protagonist is “the virgin bitch”, “the bad guy”, etc. I am very humble about these comments. I read it and accepted some of the suggestions.

When the protagonist should be ruthless, of course, he must be ruthless, and bad people can’t be the protagonist, but in the author’s humble opinion, even if the protagonist is the starting point, he can’t be ruthless without a bottom line, and he can’t be ruthless without reason, and he can’t kill for the sake of creating Decisive character, in order to be ruthless.

   Always have a reason.

   Take Li Xin as an example, if Li Chun was tied in front of him, he would definitely be stabbed to death without blinking an eye, but with irrelevant women and children tied in front of him, he would be a little embarrassed to do it.

Of course, readers are the author’s parents, and readers’ opinions must be absorbed and accepted. The character of the protagonist of the next book will be set in advance, and will not be substituted according to the author’s character. After all, I am a weak chicken. , you may die in two or three days wherever you go.

On the whole, this book has a beginning and end. I can accept it as a whole, but many details have not been handled well, or the handling is very rough. Shen’s ending was also very rubbish, and looking back on it in many places, he was not very satisfied.

However, this is how online texts are written without regrets. It is impossible to revise over and over again like physical literature. As commercial literature, it is impossible to craft hundreds of words or even one or two hundred words every day. Therefore, To be able to have all beards and tails, and to have an overall look, I’m already content.

  These issues above will be taken into consideration when the next new book is published, try to avoid these shortcomings, and try to write a work that is more complete and less flawed than this book.

   Well, it’s already late at night, I’m going to bed after writing this testimonial, but I still want to thank some people here.

   Thanks to the readers who chased it all the way from beginning to end, thanks to the readers who still read it even if they saw some crude things, and thanks to all the parents who subscribed to the original version!

  In this era when you don’t need to spend any money to watch pirated copies, all the gentlemen who can spend money to watch my humble works are all upright gentlemen, and their subscriptions are also the greatest support for the author!

   I would also like to thank a big brother here whose ID is called “Looking for bugs”! !

This brother really makes me particularly grateful. The author started writing books in 2017. Since then, this big brother has spared no effort to help me pick out typos. When I wake up every morning, the first thing I do is to read his comments. , and then go and fix the typo!

   It’s been three years!

  Thank you so much! (If possible, please add the big brother to the group, I will send you a red envelope or something to express my heart!)

   Well, I’ll write here after finishing this testimonial.

   I should publish the new book within a week (if the manuscript is successfully completed), and if everyone can support it at that time, the author will be deeply impressed!

   Okay, brothers and friends, and parents.

  We are destined to see you in the next book!

   (end of this chapter)